Abdulaziz+Alhawaj

__Directions__: Instead of posting on this page, go ahead and type your first and final drafts by using the editing tools on this page. For example, to get started, type in the first draft of your first argumentative paper today. The FINAL draft will be due Friday, Oct. 4. Or, if you don't want the whole class to see it, you can email your paper to me: tconrad@weber.edu.

To Do: Look over my rewrite of the first part of your essay and then continue writing another draft improving the fluency of your essay:



**I will use (difficult conversation) as topic of my essay:**

 * why do some people avoid starting conversations with others?**


 * we can be attention for this question because usually people like to talk to others under any case,**


 * but what we should do to those people whom don't like to talk to you for several reason. which is**


 * sometimes leads to embarrassed, so there many people they willing to start any conversation but**


 * other not, from here i can say there are three issue that we can argue about it.**


 * first, you talk too much**


 * second, you blame the other person**


 * finally, you think you know all the facts**


 * I think that is a big issue for some people in this situation, also it about how can you communicate**


 * with others. I wish I can cover all this reason and give you a good essay.**